Thursday 16 April 2020

New Kid In Room 7

Room 7 got a new student today. I know it’s not nice to make fun of a new kid, but
man did he look weird. He had bright red hair, and huge red lips. His name is Ron.
Something about him seemed familiar; he looked like someone I know. We all
looked at him and stared at him because he looked like my friend and he was my
friend’s brother. 

My friend's name was Ronald McDonald’s but the new kids name was called Ron
McDonald’s. Room 7 was mocking Ron McDonald’s but then Ron was so
embarrassed but I was his friend, I was so happy that I was friend’s with Ronald
McDonald’s and Ron McDonald’s.

Then I was playing with Ron McDonald’s at lunch time. We were playing all day
then the next day we were playing again. He was playing with me then we made
some more people. He made a lot of friends. He was so happy when he made a
lot of friends.

I felt happy for him when he made a lot of friends and no one made front of him.
When he went back to class no one was mocking him or anything so then he was
friends with boys and girls.

I wanted to play with him so we did play but we played with some people so they
were my friends so I helped them when they were sad I felt happy for
Ron McDonald's. I felt so excited when he had friends by his side.


It was so nice to see a happy face on Ron McDonald’s. It was so nice that he
wasn’t crying anymore so when he was crying I was helping him to smile.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Hinemoa - I enjoyed reading your story about Ron McDonald and was so happy that you became his good friend, and that your friendship spread itself out amongst your other friends making everyone feel good - and made Ron McDonald smile! That is what good friends do. You must be an awesome friend. Keep up the good work Hinemoa and I look forward to reading some more of your writing.
    Kind regards
    Mrs McMillan

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